Bits and Pieces of Death

They found him keeled over and clutching a white gilded mushroom. He stirred and said, “I just wanted to taste a destroying angel…”

Before the deployment, his father gave him an engraved silver lighter for luck. It was his grandfather’s. He kept it in a chest pocket and pulled it out occasionally to smoke a spliff. During an exchange of gunfire a bullet caught him right in the lighter. His father received from the military a package containing a mangled silver lighter and soot covered dog tags.

The barrel was cold in his mouth. When he pulled the trigger it clicked. He was curious what it felt like to have a gun in his mouth. He pulled the trigger again. Then again. And for the last time, an overlooked bullet punched through the roof of his mouth and severed his spinal cord. His friends and family were astonished and said things like ‘He was so happy’ and ‘I don’t understand how this could have happened…’

It hung belly up in its bowl of water. It lay stiff and cold in the cage, its eyes and mouth grimaced open, its long ears a-lop. Its purr dwindled off to silence. After a series of small barks its rise of breath shuddered into non-motion. He sat in his deathbed and removed the tubing that crowded his arm and died happily.

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3 responses to “Bits and Pieces of Death

  1. The only paragraph that doesn’t quite work for me is the last one. The rest are lovely vignettes.

    Do you mind if I say that? I know that wordpress isn’t exactly the best forum for critique…but…figured I’d put it out there

  2. Aww, fuck it.

    I’ve been coasting through all this time making mistakes left and right with nobody up and telling it like it is. I freely accept critique. No shame in accepting and absorbing contrasts of perspective.

    I’ll leave it in, just so people know what you were talking about.

  3. That makes me happy. There’s something about someone who can’t take constructive critique that is just…wrong…

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